2. From my feedback, I thought it was important that I paid special attention to telling the story of what product does and why someone would want it. I was surprised that my group thought I should spend less time on the mechanics of the shirt, as I thought a deeper understanding of how it worked might intrigue a listener. Overall, I had quality feedback that was all helpful in way or another.
3. As I stated above, I dedicated much more time selling how the shirt helps a customer. I elaborated on the problem that it would fix. I also emphasized how much of a pain it would be if you did not have my shirt. Lastly, I spent much less time talking about the science of how the shirt works in an attempt to avoid boring whoever I would be speaking to.
Hey David!
ReplyDeleteI want to start off by saying how I love how you used the picture as your “background” image. I thought it was great to add in on the whole assignment, which without saying that you also made a great appearance overall by how you were dressed. I liked your pitch from the beginning to the end, you kept it at a casual speed but not in monotone level, which is awesome! All I would change is adding more information and making the pitch a bit longer.
Hey David,
ReplyDeleteYou definitely improved your elevator pitch compared to the previous ones. Not only your service service itself, where you go deeper to explain your product idea and how would benefit its consumers, but your "public speech" as well. It seems more professional and confident. Great job!